ShaViva's Stargate Fan ... Stuff

I've posted the first chapter in my promised Major Lorne fan fiction story - called Forlorn Hope.  I'm trying a 'write as you post' approach this time although I may revert back to writing the entire story if I get too nervous about inadvertant mistakes in early chapters.  It's up on fanfiction.net - there's a link on the One Off Stories page here.